Love it.. I'd still make the bottom blue a touch taller so it covers the top of the text just a tiny bit more.. And still probably make the bullet a hair bigger, 1-3pt more tops just to give it more draw to the eye when looking at it.
Here's the example I was talking about before.. Use the black separation line too it will give it an extra touch and soften it from the white background to the blue bar. I had these done glossy on the heavier stock and it looks awesome. But i'm also a crazy cartoon character handing this stuff out in deli's and gas stations to complete strangers. So I wanted a massive visual overload so it wasn't a "standard card" that they would just chuck into the trash.
I agree with Steve. Little more blue and up the bullets a couple font sizes...look great. Doyou need some good printes to do the job?? Let me know, i have 2 companies that due amazing work on the cheap.
Thanks for all the hell everybody. I'm liking the way its starting to look, what do you think about this? Remember it's going to be on glossy and heavy paper, these things are gonna kick ass
I get a really good price on them so I'm all set with that
I like them a lot and when you get a chance can you send me some more I handed all mine out at the local car show. I do have pictures that I want to post but I cant get the images off the card.
mike email me the templete, let me see if i can print them out at work. if i can ill print them off for you than mail them or we can meet up one weekend.